LINDSEY’S WRITING PRACTICE: Book Review – “Midnight Roost: Weird & Creepy Stories”

Warning: These Stories May Disturb Your Sleep

Review: Midnight Roost (Volume 1 of the Midnight Anthology series)

By Lindsey Martin-Bowen

I confess it: My preferred reading choices have leaned toward the “rom-coms,” both traditional literary and contemporary, i.e., Jane Austen’s Pride and Prejudice, Emma, Sense and Sensibility, and so forth: Emily Brontë’s Wuthering Heights and Charlotte Brontë’s Jane Eyre, James Joyce’s “Ulysses,” and his short stories, especially “Araby.” Likewise, early 20^th century novelist Daphne Du Maurier thrilled me by combining romance and suspense in Rebecca and Fisherman’s Cove. Plus, a more recent plethora of novels, (especially The Accidental Tourist and Pultizer-prize winning Breathing Lessons) by Anne Tyler, and Toni Morrison’s Beloved have enticed me to donate my hours (and cash) many times, as did Joan Didion’s Play It as It Lays.

Further, even if Edgar Allen Poe’s “The Tell-Tale Heart,” Oscar Wilde’s “The Picture of Dorian Gray,” and Franz Kafka’s “Metamorphosis” intrigued me, they didn’t match my love for the romances.

Yet after reading Midnight Roost, comprising 23 not only chilling, but well-wrought tales, I declare Move over, Poe, Wilde, Kafka, Steven King—here’s a fiction collection that matches your scary stories. And as alluring as the Twilight Zone stories may be, they’ve “got nuthin” over the mastery of the fictional elements (detailed sensual descriptions, rhythmic,flowing sentences, and strong tension buildup—interlaced wth imaginative, sometimes bizzare settings and outcomes) than these 23 tales reveal. In short, this masterfully-written collection mesmerized me. And here’s why:

The first two tension-filled stories play with the “haunted house” archetype, even though the reader can’t be sure it’s the house that’s haunted, especially in Zack Ellafy’s “House on the Plains” which opens with a sad story— after her marriage ended, Madison attempts to set up a new household—yes, on the Plains. Not only does her initial move into the house create tension, when her husband follows her to her new home, he adds to the stress by threatning her life.

The setting plays a huge role in the themes and outcome in the second tale, too. Chris Barili opens “Shaken” with a baby crying. Neither of the parents, Misty and George can make their son stop, and when nothing will stop his tears, the couple slowly realizes their child isn’t crying because of colic. And the world beyond the earth may well have caused the babe’s screams.

In contrast to the two opening stories, Joseph Carrabis’s “The Beach” occurs outdoors (on a real beach), which the protagonist “hadn’t seen in forty years,” when “[m]oss and ivy grew over the gate’ s red brick pillars, once clearly visible.” Throughout most of this tale, Carrabis’s detailed imagery engaged me up to the tense ending.

This collection includes two more Carrabis pieces combining strong imagery and symbolism, “Blood Magic,” uses the Genesis “apple” imagery intertwined with witches whose arms are tree limbs and who present humans with apples to resolve their problems. Again, his detailed imagery captures the reader. Set in a “copse of ancient, dark boled trees,” this story builds even more tension than “The Beach” and “Binky.” And Carrabis indeed knows how to twist a tale, enhance its drama by turning it upside-down, especially toward the ending, where it zaps the reader.

Then toward the end of the anthology, Carrabis’s futuristic “Binky” explores genetic markers and abortion advocates with with this frightning tale that entices readers to question today’s sociological values.

D.L. Mullan set “Mangled” in an opposite setting from the previous landscapes. In fact, it opens within what appears to be a hospital inside a space ship. Told in the first person point-of-view by a wounded female soldier, now a patient sharing visions now appearing in her heads “images splashed in my mind’s eye. My twentieth birthday party. Then a picture of my graduation from boot camp. The darkness of a moonless night, where millions of stars shone in their galaxies above filled me with apprehension . . . ” Despite all the trauma, the narrator takes the reader into an unexpected dimension hinting at hope. Insightful multi-levels of meaning exist here.

“The Easterville Glass Ghost” by Christa Planko is indeed a ghost story, and the main character Taryn studies a history of the town’s glassworks, which includes an “other-worldly” event with a likely “friendly spirit” that “she believed wanted to look out for her well-being. A foreman, maybe. Taryn could feel the spirit smile when that thought entered her mind.” Clever writing here made reading this story a delight.

Award-winning and best-selling author of more than 100 books and master at character development, Paul Kane penned a contemporary piece about an old legend, “The White Lady,” set in a blizzard that changes life dramatically for Harry Sharpe, publicist for Binge TV Productions, a man who “always believed you made your own luck.” After Sharpe gave up driving his car, he trudged through snow till he found his way to a nearby inn, entitled The White Lady. There, he encountered hints of his fate from the barman, an expert on “The White Lady” legends worldwide, who explained,

“Like so many variations going back centuries, she is said to have no

visible face.” He shrugged. “I did a bit of research when I knew it was

going to be important. You do, don’t you?”

Harry shrugged himself now; he couldn’t give a flying shit. Ex-

except he found himself saying, “And your version?”

The man smiled. “The original spirit of vengeance, ours is.”

Harry couldn’t help grinning too. “I’ve seen that one as well, only

it was Nicolas Cage riding a motorcycle.”

“Vengeance for the wronged, vengeance against—”

Harry flapped his hand, cutting the man off in mid-flow. “Urban

legends. I don’t blame you for pushing the marketing side of things,

I t’s what I’d do. Play to the tourists, the audience, right? But you can

save the spiel as far as I’m concerned.”

That conversation hooked me—and I quickly read the 23-page story. It’s now one of my favorite “thriller” stories ever.

A new addition to WordCrafter Press authors, Colorado’s Sonia Pipkin displays Disney-like appeal in “Once Upon a Time.” Not only does her tale with that phrase, but it draws readers into “a magical forest, [where] woodland creatures lived in peaceful co-existence, and not one human was the wiser.” Layering this opening with crisp descriptions of a sky “the perfect shade of aazure blue, trees with full leafy crowns,” she enforced the peaceful setting by adding, “not one drop of blood had ever been spolt on the soil in the enchanted land until that day.”

After building tension among the creatures with their response to events that transpire that day,, she recounts the “Goldilocks” tale—but with a twist—from the bears’ point-of-view.

And trust me, this story’s depth and word choices allow readers to see this is no mere “fairy tale” today. Just ask any deer who may roam in your neighborhood, as they do in mine.

Another tale, C.R. Johansson’s “She Shed Galleria,” reveals the author’s talent for developing intriguing, even odd-ball characters that can snare a reader’s heart, even if those characters are quite ornery. Such is Uluna, a portrait artist who owns the She She Galleria, dresses in mink, and likes to paint men performing work that excites them. Auto mechanic Bob describe her when she waltzed into a bar where he nursed a beer:

Having grown up surrounded by hunters, he recognized the expensive mink fur that lined the collar of the woman’s long, thick coat which swallowed her body like a giant bear. Even without the coat, he knew she was rich by the way she shook her head in contempt while she surveyed the room, as if the bar and the people were vermin.

After Bob became one of her subjects, this story twists into one that could easily find a home in The Twilight Zone among such tales with a comparable “oddball” sense of humor. I loved it. (But note, this is one for the “over-21” crowd.)

Another of my favorites, South African author Roberta Eaton Cheadle’s “The Behemoth’s Rage” exhibits flowing, descriptive language emulating sounds of the sea, which it personifies with detailed imagery. For example, the saga opens with,

The sun breached the horizon, spilling brilliant light across both sky and ocean. The water, an expanse of silver satin encrusted with clusters of glittering diamonds, paid homage, gracefully rising and dropping into curtseys.”

The light unveiled the dark grey behemoth, seated on the shore. It illuminated her edges, turning them into a froth of lighter grey lace. Shards of brilliance splashed across her sombre mourning dress. The aging face of the immobile matriarch disappeared into thick, golden edged clouds, leaving a headless hulk.

Especially significant in this tale is the word, “Behemoth,” (also known as Leviathan) alluding to the huge creature in Job 40:15-24, wherein God humbles Job by presenting the behemoth to him. With a parallel theme, Cheadle’s piece retells an old sea legend, but describes the creature as a female and adds a twist at the end—one that isn’t in Job 40.

Patty L. Fletcher’s “Casualties of War” opens with the lines,

DERRICK SAT AMONG the drunken Clear Bloods, allowing

their teasing to wash over him. He hated this role, but what choice

did he have? If he didn’t learn what plans were being set against

the Blended Lives Federation, all which he’d fought for would be

for nothing.

Ah ha! From this intro, I interpreted this story about “war casualties” was set in the Old West during the struggles between the settlers and Native American tribes. I wondered if it would entail time-travel or if it would reflect actual historical events in our nation’s early decades, which it would symbolically connect to the our nation’s contemporary situation.

Then,after a few pages, I realized my misinterpretation: Yes, the story contains aspects that apply to our nation—but dear readers, it was a tale quite opposite from what I anticipated. I won’t spoil the ending—or any possible interpretations: Both are surprises you won’t forget.

In contrast, Keith J. Hoskins’s tale, “Teddy,” centering around Quarterback Brad Jarrett, “is based on a true story,” according to its narrator. And it opens with Jarrett throwing a pigskin to the runner who scored the winning touchdown. When his team members hosted him to their shoulders, Jarrett “relished the splendor of the moment and bathed in the praise,” thinking “Could life get any better.”

Surely Hoskins expanded that story into a different dimension by making Jarrett’s stuffed Teddy bear come alive—but only to the quarterback. The ensuing battle between the two makes this surreal story a delight.

Another story that would serve well as a Twilight Zone episode, Denise Aparro’s “The Pines” leaves the reader in a strange space with female protagonist Orna Douglas, who happens to be both a nurse and a mystery writer. Opening with “The ping of brass.” auditory and visual descriptions, and quick dialogue, this story captures a reader and moves quickly. Bravo!

Likewise, Julie Jones’s “Night of Terror” opens opens with a description and rapid movement that also makes it another excellent Twilight Zone candidate:

THE FIRST SPACESHIP showed up around two o’clock in the afternoon. Doug and

Billy ran in from the sandbox to tell use about it, too worked up to notice Miss Clara

hollering about tracking up the clean floors. Their alarm cinvinced us something was ]

going on, though a UFO seemed far-fetched. We went outside to look at the sky—to

appease the upset boys, if nothing else—and there it was, just like they said.

Dear readers, his story hooked me immediately—and engaged me till its ending.

Another quick-moving tale with lush imagery and humor, Isabel Grey’s “Rabbits Cannot See Pink Fireworks,” written from a rabbit’s point-of-view, hooked me into reading it through the wee hours. The ninth-year rabbit storyteller not only provides a unique perspective, but adds nuances of social comment on a still controversial subject in our current society.

One more possible Twilight-Zone nomination, Robera M. Senese’s“Take Two” focuses upon a daughter-mother relationship. It opens showing the daughter, Sondra, revealing her perfectionism

in her profession:

“SONDRA STOOPED TO PEER through the camera focus. The camera rested

on a tripod set up in front of her usual recording location in the corner of her bedroon.

Yes, perfect. The lighting on the stool in front was just right, making the red leather

look lush. Beside her was her makeup table, styish and shining with black lacquer.

Once, she had noted in oneofher videos that the table was a little too shiny. A lovely

charcoal grey table runner took care of that problem and also stopped the various

makeup bottlesand boxes from sliding on the smooth surface.

After Sondra decides to help her aging mother, Florence “freshen” her looks, the tale

becomes more intriguing with what may be a surprise ending. Likely, many readers may

find that ending justified, too.

“Immediate Intervention” by Mario Acevedo takes on a more somber tome in this futuristic piece that may become closer to reality within a few years. Along with bringing in AI and algorithms, the story creates a frightening reality wherein The System rules human outcomes.

In contrast, Kaye Lynne Booth’s “Melina” leads the reader into the magical world of a mermaid (Melina) and her encounter with humans. Thestory opens with a delightful scene of Melina flipping her tail “playfully at her little siser, Elsbeth, who gives a mental titter and swims off . . .” Being a mermaid, Melina is able to sit with her sister by sending thought waves to her.

This allows Elsbeth (who swam too far away) to contact her sister when she becomes caught in

a fisherman’s net. In her attempt to help thr young mermaid, Melina becomes captured by humans

and begins to morph legs. Great tension here—but no spoilers. Part of this tale’s charm is its intensity.

Michacele Jordan’s “Afterwards” is a psycho-drama about Brad, riddled with nightmares after he’d suffered a car crash, an accident that killed a young woman, who re-appeared in his subsequent constant nightmares. This sent Brad to a psychiatrist, Dr. Rosenberg, whose “traffic light green” eyes haunted him while she attempts o help him regain his mental health. Albeit grounded in “reality,” this

one’s another suspenseful tale.

And speaking of suspense, Robert Kostanczuk’s “A Visitant Comes to the Window” evokes shades of imagery from Franz Kafka’s “The Metamorphosis” wherein the main character, Gregor transforms “into a gigantic insect.” This tale just may be more frightening.

Indeed, the last two stories in this collection definitely raised the hairs on the back of my neck. M.J. Mallon’s “The Cull” reflects some ideas similar to those in Oscar Wilde’s “The Painting of Dorian Gray,” but this tale is far more gastly—and heartbreaking.

And finally, Isabel Grey’s award-winning (WordCrafter’s Short Fiction Award 2023) “Red Door House” sent the proverbial chills down my spine (all the way to my toes). At first, the story brought to mind Toni Morrison’s Pulitzer Prize-winning novel, Beloved, wherein House 124 is haunted by the ghost of the character Sethe’s murdered daughter..

Yet that haunting is mild compared to the Red Door House—a house that narrates this wild tale.

Indeed, those who love thrillers will likely enjoy this one. Yes, the story is indeed well-written, especially the way it builds suspense. But the ending overwhelmed me, perhaps because my 1906 historic house may be haunted, I don’t know. Nevertheless, it was a tad too thrilling for my sensitivities—and kept me up till 4 AM., shivering. Sigh.

About Lindsey Martin-Bowen

On Halloween 2023, redbat books released Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s 7th poetry collection, CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison. Her 4 th collection, Where Water Meets the Rock, was nominated for a Pulitzer; her 3rd, CROSSING KANSAS with Jim Morrison was a finalist in the QuillsEdge Press 2015-2016 Contest. In 2017, it won the Kansas Writers Assn award, “Looks Like a Million.” Writer’s Digest gave her “Vegetable Linguistics” an Honorable Mention in its 85th Annual (2017) Contest. Her Inside Virgil’s Garage (Chatter House Press 2013) was a runner-up in the 2015 Nelson Poetry Book Award. McClatchy Newspapers named her Standing on the Edge of the World (Woodley Press/Washburn University) was one of the Ten Top Poetry Books of 2008. It was nominated for a Pen Award.

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