LINDSEY’S WRITING PRACTICE

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Borrow a Character Exercise

For years, authors have borrowed characters from other authors’ works. For example, Jean Rhys’s novel, Wide Sargasso Sea, details the early life of Mrs. Rochester, wife to Mr. Rochester in Charlotte Bronte’s Jane Eyre. Likewise, George MacDonald Fraser uses Tom Brown and Flashman from Thomas Hughes’s novel, Tom Brown’s School Days, John Gardner wrote the novel, Grendel, about the beast in Beowulf, and Joseph Heller brought the biblical King David to life in God Knows. Now, it’s your turn.

Book Cover: Wide Sargasso Sea, by Jean Rhys

The Exercise

Select an antagonist or a minor character from a story or novel by someone else—select a character who especially intrigues you. Then, make that character the protagonistin a scene or story you write.

For instance, what would Allie Fox’s wife say if she were to tell her version of Mosquito Coast, or if she were to write about a courtship between her and Allie?

What might Rabbit’s illegitimate daughter (from John Updike’s Rabbit novels) say if she told her story?

The Objective:

To enter into the imaginative world of another writer, to understand that particular world and to build from it. And don’t forget to have fun with this exercise. It can yield wild results.

About Lindsey Martin-Bowen

On Halloween 2023, redbat books released Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s 7th poetry collection, CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison. Her 4th collection, Where Water Meets the Rock, was nominated for a Pulitzer; her 3rd, CROSSING KANSAS with Jim Morrison was a finalist in the QuillsEdge Press 2015-2016 Contest. In 2017, it won the Kansas Writers Assn award, “Looks Like a Million.” Writer’s Digest gave her “Vegetable Linguistics” an Honorable Mention in its 85th Annual (2017) Contest. Her Inside Virgil’s Garage (Chatter House Press 2013) was a runner-up in the 2015 Nelson Poetry Book Award. McClatchy Newspapers named her Standing on the Edge of the World (Woodley Press/Washburn University) was one of the Ten Top Poetry Books of 2008. It was nominated for a Pen Award.

Author and Poet, Lindsey Martin Bowen

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LINDSEY’S WRITING PRACTICE REVIEW: The Rock Star & The Outlaw 2

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Review: The Rock Star & The Outlaw 2: Double Visions by Kaye Lynne Booth

Learning that Kaye Lynne Booth wrote a sequel to The Rock Star and The Outlaw delighted me, not only because the first novel left the romantic couple separated in two different time zones, but also because both novels symbolize how our minds travel through time—how certain images, songs, even smells, send us back into the past to relive an event—sometimes a joyful one, other times a fearful or sad one—and then our minds return to our spaces in the present. (Of course, we humans also dream about future events, too.)

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Thus, in lieu of being solely a space-age adventure piece, this work may also be interpreted as a psychological novel, exploring realities that are more than fantasies. Yes, time travel is a reality in the world of the mind—not only in fiction, but in the world most humans view as “reality.” Likewise, in fiction, some characters have the opportunity to change past events to create variant outcomes. Indeed, these two time-travelers attempt to change outcomes, and the outcomes remain sometimes successful, sometimes not.

Wisely, Booth uses separate names for the younger Rock Star and the current one. In this time-travel tale, the older (or more current) Rock Star, Amaryllis Maria Sanchez, uses her given name, whereas Booth refers to the heroine of the first novel as “Rock Star,” which helps the reader follow the story-lines more easily. Likewise, in this sequel, LeRoy is Amaryllis’ mate—and “Cowboy” refers to the version of him in the past.

In a similar vein, Amaryllis’s colleague and confidant in the first novel, Monique appears as merely a version of the “Shaman Woman” from volume one. Yet, throughout most of this novel, Monique holds no memory of her past Shaman Woman persona. And through this supporting character, Booth illustrates psychiatric theories of “finding the self,” which adds one more dimension to this story than many time-travel episodes lack.

Further, such time gaps create new problems that Amaryllis and LeRoy must resolve. For example, when Amaryllis leaps into the future (2030) to escape an impending disaster in 1888 she learns that she has no future identity because she was “never born.” Thus, along with returning to the Old West to save LeRoy from prison—or a hanging, she must locate her grandmother and resolve the situation causing that grandparent to die before she married—and thus, unable to give birth to Amaryllis’s mother, who must exist to birth Amaryllis.

This sequel also displays the character growth from Rock Star to Amaryllis. In the first series, Rock Star performs gigs nightly, and like a multitude of rock musicians, fortifies herself with alcohol and drugs. She lives in what has become for many talented musicians, the dark side of their profession: live fast and die young. In fact, that nearly happened to tough chick Rock Star in the first novel.

Yet in this serial,Rock Star has indeed matured into Amaryllis, who exhibits more “depth” and empathy for others. In fact, one of the main reasons she sets her time machine (more akin to a watch or cell phone than to a Doctor Who British phone booth) is to rescue LeRoy from being hanged.

Similarly, although neither the characters nor the author overtly discus the subject, this story serves somewhat as a model for genetic (DNA) codes with its illustrations of characters viewing themselves as their grandparents or grandchildren—as many of us do in the “real” world.

Along with the zany , complex plots in this time-travel novel, Booth reveals one of her most delightful talents, which not only mesmerizes the reader, but helps tie together the past landscapes to the future: her vivid and rhythmic descriptions of western landscapes.

For example, halfway through the novel, after Amaryllis has landed back in 1888 and mounted the horse, Demon, Booth lures the reader into that world with descriptive words resounding with fine poetry:

“She brought Demon to a halt at the top of the ridge leading up to the rocks above the hideout. It had been slow going over the rugged rocks which created the canyon walls. The afternoon sun cast a golden flow over the sprawling Nevada desert, illuminating the rugged terrain of the box canyon below. Steep, rocky walls rose high above the camp, nestled within this natural amphitheater at the boxed end, making it seem almost like a hidden gem, cradled in the arid embrace of the earth.” (151).

Likewise, when Rock Star and Cowboy are about to head out onto a trail, Booth describes the night with these beautiful lines:

“The moon had just come over the horizon, illuminating the arid desert landscape in its ethereal glow. The silvery light cast long shadows across the undulating dunes, accentuating their curves and ridges. Grains of sand shimmered like tiny diamonds, reflecting the moon’s brilliance, mirroring the twinkle of the stars above. In the quiet solitude, the desert felt alive with the presence of nocturnal creatures barely perceptible in the stillness.” (163).

Moreover, I urge readers to finish reading the first volume of this time-traveling, romantic western (The Rock Star and The Outlaw, released two years ago). Not only will it help make reading the latter novel more lucid, it will add dimensions to the characters and illustrate their inner growth from how they acted and viewed the world in the initial novel.

—Lindsey Martin-Bowen

CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison

The DARK HORSE WAITS in BOULDER

About Lindsey Martin-Bowen

On Halloween 2023, redbat books released Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s 7th poetry collection, CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison. Her 4th collection, Where Water Meets the Rock, was nominated for a Pulitzer; her 3rd, CROSSING KANSAS with Jim Morrison was a finalist in the QuillsEdge Press 2015-2016 Contest. In 2017, it won the Kansas Writers Assn award, “Looks Like a Million.” Writer’s Digest gave her “Vegetable Linguistics” an Honorable Mention in its 85th Annual (2017) Contest. Her Inside Virgil’s Garage (Chatter House Press 2013) was a runner-up in the 2015 Nelson Poetry Book Award. McClatchy Newspapers named her Standing on the Edge of the World (Woodley Press/Washburn University) was one of the Ten Top Poetry Books of 2008. It was nominated for a Pen Award.

Author and Poet, Lindsey Martin Bowen

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Lindsey’s Writing Practice: Out-of-this-world Writing Exercise

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COFFEE, TEA, or TAKE ME TO YOUR LEADER

About a month ago, an interesting piece landed in my online mailbox.

A writer named Alle posted “tips for writing emotionally heavy scenes.” It went like this:

Alle sez:

1. Make a cup of tea while you don’t think about the work. Let images, phrases, feelings

float under you and through you.

2. Take a heartening sniff of the freshly brewed tea. Sip and savor. This moment is for you.

3. To your writing space.

4. Sit comfortably. Feet flat on the ground.

5. Write relentlessly. Write-write-write and don’t stop.

6. Check your feet. Still flat?

7. Write som’ more.

When you feel you have a first draft, lean back to enjoy many more sips.

Although I’m sure Alle’s suggestions will help many writers—and dear readers, please use them if you believe they’ll kick-start your work. (And please share with me if those hints do.)

Nevertheless, every writer is different. This technique would not work for me—not for an “emotionally heavy scene.” That tea would likely send me back to bed. (Perhaps I might dream about an emotionally heavy scene, but when I awoke, I’d likely forget it.)

So what are my suggestions for penning a heavy emotional scene?

Drink coffee. Lots of it. At least, as much as you’ll require to get your pulse flowing with the heat of that “emotionally heavy scene.” I am serious here. I admit, my coffee leans more toward cafe au lait (half-coffee, half-milk). Plus, I add a bit of hot water, just so I don’t become too jittery. But I need a drink that helps me soar with those emotions I attempt to capture on the page. Especially when they contain dialogue—or spats between lovers or siblings. Or between enemies. I mean, c’on: tea for emotion? (Perhaps that works if one is wearing a kimono and performing The Mikado. But I’ll never sing opera—no matter how hard I try.) In short, I must get down and dirty with only coffee.

And then, here’s an exercise that might work well for we coffee-drinkers. Not only would it be emotional, but it might also keep us from floating too far from the earth:

First, select one of your favorite songs—with or without lyrics—and play it on whatever device works for you. Savor it while you sip that coffee, then

—Imagine you meet an alien whose world is identical to yours—EXCEPT it consists of NO MUSIC. While you sip away and savor the music, write what you would tell the alien about music. (And note—trying to describe this to a being from a planet where music does not exist will likely become a highly emotional scene, correct?) How will that alien respond?

—So, explore your thoughts and feelings about music.

—Consider what OTHERS might feel and think.

—What do you know about music anyway? How would you explain it?

—What do you observe about yourself when you listen to it?

—Do you experience an overwhelming feeling that the music creates?

—Are you able to connect what you already know and feel to something you are experiencing and observing while you listen to the music?

—Are you able to predict how the alien will respond, how he or she would feel?

REMEMBER: Writing is discovering.

Finally, after undergoing this writing exercise, consider what new observations, discoveries, relations to what you knew about music before this exercise. Have you experienced any new connections to understanding your relationship with music and expressing it to some being who had never experienced it?

And please remember to have fun with this. I did.


About Lindsey Martin-Bowen

On Halloween 2023, redbat books released Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s 7th poetry collection, CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison. Her 4th collection, Where Water Meets the Rock, was nominated for a Pulitzer; her 3rd, CROSSING KANSAS with Jim Morrison was a finalist in the QuillsEdge Press 2015-2016 Contest. In 2017, it won the Kansas Writers Assn award, “Looks Like a Million.” Writer’s Digest gave her “Vegetable Linguistics” an Honorable Mention in its 85th Annual (2017) Contest. Her Inside Virgil’s Garage (Chatter House Press 2013) was a runner-up in the 2015 Nelson Poetry Book Award. McClatchy Newspapers named her Standing on the Edge of the World (Woodley Press/Washburn University) was one of the Ten Top Poetry Books of 2008. It was nominated for a Pen Award.

Author and Poet, Lindsey Martin Bowen

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Book Review: Cashing Checks with Jim Morrison

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About the Book

CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison offers a surreal cascade of archetypes from, among others, ancient Greece, the Bible, American Literature, and pop culture. Moving through it is the speaker’s companion spirit and guru, Jim Morrison-Lizard King, Narcissus/Adonis. Set in a world where, in Albert Einstein’s words, ‘reality is merely an illusion, ‘ Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s poems are alive with wit, evocative imagery, insight, and sometimes downright playfulness. Through heeding Morrison’s counsel to ‘go weirder, ‘ she’s made this collection reader-friendly.”-William Trowbridge, Missouri Poet Laureate, 2012-2016 Author, Call Me Fool (2022)
“In Lindsey Martin-Bowen’s CASHING CHECKS with Jim Morrison, I relish every word, compelled by the poet’s stories and singing voice. Fantasy and fact merge in these invocations of the seminal American rocker Morrison and of his spirit. Join me as a reader in exploring this exciting testament to the power of language to resurrect history and wonder.”-Denise Low, Kansas Poet Laureate, 2007-2009 Poetry Unbound Featured Poet

My Review

I was thrilled to receive a print copy of Cashing Checks with Jim Morrison, by Lindsay Martin-Bowen. The title alone, was enough to peak my interest, and lend anticipation as to what I could expect within its covers.

This collection of poems is all about hanging out, and philosphizing with the spirit of the late, great, Jim Morrison. I was amazed by the way the author captured the voice of Morrison in many of the poems, enough to let me believe briefly that maybe the author truly does converse with the dead musician. Included are poems that serve as social commentaries on life and love, on the state of the world today, and on possible futures; topics which every one of us can relate to.

So many of these poems struck a chord with me that it is impossible to pick one favorite. but I really loved the imagry in “Coming Back to Me”.

The dawn inhales and holds its breath, drawing

wisps of clouds up the foothills, where theyb hover.

Jim steps out of the mist, unsteady as some soldier

searching for his platoon on a surreal battlefield.

He wedges boot heels into fissures be3tween rock

ledges, ambles down to where gravel meets asphalt.

Then he steps onto the road leading to my Dutch

Colonel on a corner in this mountain college town,

where I chose to spend many of my remaining days,

watching parades of seasons pass in the hills’

keleidescope of colors revolving — in fall, scarlet,

gold, and bronze. In winter, cobalt blue and white.

Spring brings a rushed array — one week yellow,

the next red, then purple, and green never leaves

till late August, just before the aspen twitter

with orange and gold coins glittering in sunlight.

I don’t see a move to Kansas or any spot east, wonder

if Jim and I will land in Venice, his California beach.

He raises a hand and yells, ‘lo,’ his voice echoing

down the street, falling at my knees, now trembling.

When he heads my way, I smell his Jade East, see

his hazy body morph into solid physique, black

leather pants, jacket, and sandaled feet. He lifts his chin,

shakes his curls, then lowers his face and stares at me.

Still trembling, I remember our jaunts on a motorcycle

and a persnickety jeep — wonder if I’ll ever be free again

or if I’ll ride highways like some banshee for eternity.

And I also enjoyed the section of Tanka strings, always the sucker for syllabic poetry. Most have five Tankas, but “Jim Morrison and I Lose Our Way on a Moon Dog Night” isonly two, and short enough to share with you here.

The drive home’s always

this way — too long, when sudden

changes shakes us up.

After a few warm, sunny

days, cold winds hit us again.

Tonight, an odd haze

encircles the moon like white

light in an X-ray

outlining a frail hip bone

fallen into necrosis.

An unusual collection of poetry through which to view the world through different eyes; perhaps through the eyes of Jim Morrison. I thoroughly enjoyed Cashing Checks with Jim Morrison, and I give it five quills.

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