Book Review: The Silent Children

About the Silent Children

A gripping journey of a mother’s relentless pursuit through danger and deceit to reclaim her missing son.

In a gripping tale of courage and desperation, Annabelle’s world spirals when her son Fergus is abducted. Teaming up with her husband Benny and best friend Barb, she embarks on a relentless quest for clues. Facing uncooperative local police, they turn to the FBI, uncovering chilling ties to Annabelle’s past and a kidnapper driven by vengeance. With time against them, Annabelle forms an unlikely alliance with a mob boss, both united in a single mission. This intense story captures the fierce determination of a mother fighting against all odds to bring her child home.

My Review of The Silent Children

I purchased a digital copy of The Silent Children, by Marie Wilkens from Freebooksie. All opinions stated here are my own.

I was confused when looking for an image for this book. All I could find is the above image for the box set of 3 books, and the book I read was definitely just a single story about a single child who was kidnapped and his mother’s relentless search to find him.

My first thoughts when reading The Silent Children, was that this was this author’s first book, as there were many typos and logic inconsistencies throughout the story, which had more tell than show. But again, when looking up the book’s information, I was surprised to see that Marie Wilkens has many books under her belt. I just hope they are of better quality than this one.

While there is a good story here, the title alludes to a story of several children in peril, which is what I expected as I picked it up, so the author didn’t really deliver on the promise of the premise. I had trouble with the buy-in because the events portrayed as the distressed mother desperately searches for her son would never actually happen in real life. She would be charged with impeding an active investigation by the FBI, regardless of who her friends were. Of course, it had to unfold that way in order to allow the mother to be the hero, but it is not very realistic to what would happen in real life.

The telling of the story is just that, with a bit of dialog and action thrown in here and there. It doesn’t put the reader in the scene, but is more like a tale told around a campfire. Because of this, I was unable to relate to the character and feel her desperation. As a mother who lost a son to suicide, I should have been able to empathize with this character, and I couldn’t do so, even when I tried. Her feelings and actions just didn’t ring true.

It is a story worth reading, but not what you think from marketing materials. Because there is a good story here, in spite of the misleading title, and the inconsistencies in both writing and promotions, I give The Silent Children three quills.

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